Thursday, December 3, 2020
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Kia Ora Indyanah,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Zana and I am a blog commenter for the Summer Learning Journey. It is awesome to see your post and I hope you have registered so I can see more of your posts over the summer!
I thought this activity was very interesting as I like art and coloring and I also like to see what creative ideas people can come up with. I like your art because it still looks similar to the original painting but with a brighter, bold background that does look similar to grass, by adding your description about the green background looking like they are fighting outside you are also adding a story to the painting. To step up your post I think you could add some more information about the activity and your painting such as why you chose it. What do you think you could do to step it up?
Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your posts over the summer.
Ngā mihi nui,
Zana Yates